Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Showcase Feedback

Please comment on each presentation using the following as a guideline.

Use the 3-2-1 format
Feedback Provided by:
Title of Unit:
Consider how well the Unit Portfolio has met each of the traits from the Portfolio Rubric:
1. Instructional design
· Addresses standards and objectives
· Addresses 21st century skills
· Incorporates Curriculum-Framing Questions (CFQs)
· Uses project approaches
· Addresses student differences

2. Technology integration
· Supports content learning
· Supports 21st century skills
· Meets student and classroom needs

3. Assessment strategies
· Address standards and objectives
· Are student-centered
· Are varied and ongoing

32 comments:

  1. Feedback Provided by: Brandon Brown
    Title of Unit: Renaissance Era
    Questions: Why not give students several options for focus instead of only eyeglasses?
    How will students hold each other accountable?
    What suggestions do you have for places for students to go for research?
    Comments: Photostories are easy to do and easy to learn hot to do.
    Students are always aware of monitoring their own progress.
    Suggestions: You could compare the revolutionary aspects of the Renaissance and the similarities of the tehcnological revolution of modern times.

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  2. Abbie Freeman
    Renaissance
    3 questions
    What other community connections could be used?
    What is the name of your initial planning table?
    How will they find choices for inventions?
    2 opinions
    Your table will be a great tool. The project will be very interesting.
    1 suggestion
    Try to incorporate some textual reading materials.

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  3. Kim Knight
    Renaissance Era
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    Will your students have choices when it comes to their presenation or is it already layed out for them?
    What type of assessments will you have other than internet based?
    Will this lesson support all students classroom needs as it realtes to technology?

    COMMENT: Sounds cool!

    SUGGESTION: Give choices of presentation modes if you haven't already.

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  4. Tai Alexander
    Renaissance

    3 Questions:
    1.) How do you plan to assess the prior knowledge of the students?
    2.) Are you going to give the students choices of inventions or do they have to find it on their own?
    3.)What are your deadlines?



    2 Comments:
    I liked your project-plan self assessment handout. It seems like it will be helpful in keeping the students on track.

    Yeah! You followed your standards and objectives.

    1 Suggestion:
    Incorporate reading materials into your unit plan.

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  5. Joicelyn Armbrester
    Renaissance Era

    1). Question: How will you make sure everyone is participating/doing thier part?
    2) Question: Will there ever be direct instruction or only mini-workshops?
    3). Question: Will the students be provided with a list of deadlines?

    Comments
    1). I like the concept but it seems like it will go faster than your timeline.
    2). Very impressed with the self monitoring chart!


    Suggestion
    1). Use digital deadlines instead of paper to make it easier on yourself.

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  6. Kim Knight
    Matter
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    What will you do to include math into your MATTER lesson plan?
    How do you feel this combination will enhance your current plan?
    How will you change your student objectives to task oriented objectives?

    COMMENT: I did not like science in HS but feel this combination of science and technology would make learning fun for those with learning sytles that favor research and creativity.

    SUGGESTION: Try to add podcasts to your lesson with mini facts. Things that you would normally lecture about or things that are sometimes hard for students to retain. That way they can go back and listen to your podcast over & over until they grasp the concept.

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  7. Feedback Provided by: Brandon Brown
    Title of Unit: Matter
    Questions: Where is math going to fit in?
    Exactly what types of digital media will you use?
    How about a portfolio or a formal presentation instead of an objective test?
    Comments: Needs task oriented objectives.
    The subject matter is really interesting, and the tasks seem fun, at least to me.
    Suggestions: Physics would make a lot of sense with math in this lesson as opposed to physical science.

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  8. Review by: Anthony Jacks
    Title: Matter
    Q: How are your students going to go about reaching their objectives?
    Q: How do you implement the Jeopardy game in your class?
    Q: How are you going to manage the timeline of the projects? What if an activity takes longer/shorter than expected?

    C: Seems like this would be a fun project.
    C: The student sample has good potential.

    S: Mix up transitions on PowerPoint

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  9. Joicelyn Armbrester
    Matter

    Questions
    1. How can your special education students work on a modified rubric if they are grouped with general education students?
    2. Is this a "stand alone" project or will other objectives be intergrated into this project?
    3. Where do you think you can pull in a real world connection/agency for an entry document?


    Comments
    1. Objectives are not task oriented.
    2. More Unit Questions are needed.

    Suggestions
    1.A reflection activity at the end of the project will help students reflect on the this work and prepare to change things in thier next project.

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  10. Abbie Freeman
    Matter
    3 questions
    How does Jeopardy used with your project?
    What are the important basic measurement skills needed?
    How will students use the video camera?
    2 comments
    Standards should be task oriented.
    Great student sample.
    1 suggestion
    Incorporate some textual and functional text into your lesson for those students that have not passed the grad exam.

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  11. Ashley Canham
    Title: Matter
    Question 1: How will the students show they gained information through charts?
    Question 2: Are the students working together in groups or are they working individually?
    Question 3: If the students use powerpoint how will make sure they make it a production like photostory and not just a powerpoint slide show?
    Comment 1: I like that your sound affects!
    Comment 2: Good Planning. I would love to join your class!
    Suggestion: I think you should have some unit questions about technology.

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  12. Tai Alexander
    Matter

    3 Questions:
    1. How do you plan to accomodate special needs students into this project? (Did not get the opportunity to see this section.)
    2. Do you plan to use any reading material or text with your project?
    3. What is the real world connection with this unit?


    2 Comments:
    1. I like the "exit slip" idea at the end of each class.
    2. Be sure standards and objectives are task oriented

    1 Suggestion:
    Use as many rubrics as you can with this project

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  13. Feedback Provided by: Brandon Brown
    Title of Unit: The Important Thing
    Questions: What if the kids have trouble knowing how to creatively write a myth or legend?
    What if a students gets carried away with a good story but lacks a moral?
    Do you think having students present their story or playing the video to the class would be a better assessment?
    Comments: This is a really interesting lesson that taps student creativity.
    A Photostory for this would be much easier and just as fun as a movie (like a story book).
    Suggestions: Poems would be a cool thing to use on this in addition to the others.

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  14. Joicelyn Armbrester
    The Important Thing

    Questions
    1. How will you monitor student progress during the project?
    2.Will the students be provided any other tools besides a Venn Diagram?
    3. Will the students write an original fable or myth?
    Comments
    1.Thank you for creating this for me to use!
    2.Great essential question!

    Suggestions
    1. Objectives need to be task oriented.

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  15. Km Knight
    The Important Thing?
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    Shouldn't civic responsibility be one of "The Important Things" that we,as a 21st century school, should be imbedded into all of our lesson plans?
    What other types of technology could you use other than photo story and movie maker? By the end of the upcoming year, our students will need more engaging tools?
    How could you incorporate this lesson plan with say math or science?

    COMMENT: Love the promotion of civic responsibility! I feel this is how we will build our students into find young people who will give back to their community. The more the better!

    SUGGESTION: Use some cooler presentation and/or Web 2.0 tools in the future. I think this will come with time as our students begin to demand and create more.

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  16. Title: The Important Thing
    Q: How do you determine what a morals are appropriate?
    Q: Do you limit the amount of fables that can be chosen.
    Q: How would you handle technical difficulties with the blogs?

    C: I would enjoy this project if I were in the 7th grade.
    C:Good use of technology with the age group.

    S: Fix your standards to be task oriented.

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  17. Ashley Canham
    Unit Title: The Important Thing
    Question 1: Are there more tasks the students can complete during the unit?
    Question 2: How will you break the students up into their groups?
    Question 3: How will you keep this project student centered?
    Comment 1: I like that you have a target audience.
    Comment 2: Great essential question!
    Suggestion: I suggest you slow down just a little when you read your story, but I loved it!

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  18. Tai Alexander
    The Important Thing

    3 Questions:
    1.How will you monitor students progress?
    2.How will you assess prior knowledge?
    3. What other handouts do you plan to use to assess students knowledge?

    2 Comments:
    1.Great questions Abbie!
    2.I'm glad you were able to show me how to tie fables in with civics.

    1 Suggestion:
    1. Use rubrics as much as possible

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  19. Brian Young
    The important thing




    Before the unit is introduced, let students answer the question. What is most important? The answers would be wonderful to read.


    Make objectives specific.

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  20. Title: In the Beginning

    Q: How do you define cradle? That determines the answer that you get.
    Q? What type of self monitoring strategies are the students usinng?

    C: Good essential question
    C: Some confusion on you unit and essential question.
    S: Work on making your objectives task oriented.

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  21. Kim Knight
    In The Beginning
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    How are you going to ensure that students stay on task?
    Are you providing written or on-lineresources to get the student headed in the right direction?
    How will you help those who quickly loose interest in the project or get off task?

    COMMENT: I love the whole prove that you are right by presenting facts idea of the project.

    SUGGESTION: Add a debate element to the presentation! I would love to sit in on a debate.

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  22. Feedback Provided by: Brandon Brown
    Title of Unit: In The Beginning
    Questions: Why did you choose not to use many technological applications?
    What if a students has firm beliefs that go against the curriculum or the understood truth of the class?
    How could you bring in internet and technology into the lesson more?
    Comments: This lesson could get really argumentative and heated at some schools (creation vs. evolution).
    There is a lot of science in this lesson as well.
    Suggestions: You could combine this lesson with basically ever other class that is offered.

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  23. Ashley Canham
    Unit Title: In the Beginning...
    Question 1: How will you have the students connect the material they read to the project?
    Question 2: How is this going to be a student- centered project?
    Question 3: What databases will you allow them to use when researching?
    Comment 1: I like that you have your students write a journal entry everyday.
    Comment 2: I like that you are having them create a newspaper.
    Suggestion: Have the students create the artifact.

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  24. Abbie Freeman
    In the Beginning...
    3 questions
    What is the hook?
    How What does your learning log look like? I would like to use it.
    Could they share the newspaper with someone or maybe the Beacon?
    2 comments
    Good essential question.
    Great student sample!!
    1 suggestion
    Try to incorporate as much functional and informational text as possible.

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  25. Brian Young
    In the beginning

    How much evolution evidence will be needed to support their position?

    Are you prepared for the controversy that comes with evolution?


    You really need to distinguish between civilization and origin of human kind.

    Good questions.

    Make objectives task oriented.

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  26. Title: Ecology
    q:What was the purpose of the project?
    q:How do you plan to integrate these two subjects?

    C: Good job on the objectives
    C: Good job on the essential, unit, and content questions.

    S:Be more detailed in your instructional procedures so that I could follow it if it were the first time I ever saw it.

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  27. Ashley Canham
    Unit Title: Ecology
    Question 1: How are you going to divide your students into groups?
    Question 2: Can they use the checklist throughout the entire unit?
    Question 3: How will the students be assessed at the end of the project? Panel of judges or class presentations?
    Comment 1: I really like the postcard idea. It is very orginal.
    Comment 2: I enjoy how you have intergrated technology with biology.
    Suggestion: I think you should send your postcard to a real person.

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  28. Brian Young
    Ecology

    I am glad I am not in your position. Teaching BTA and science.

    Make instructional process more detailed.

    Nice objectives.

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  29. Joicelyn Armbrester
    Ecology

    Question
    1. Will you be able to do all of this in such a short period of time?
    2. How do the crosswords fit into the assessment?
    3. Will special education students be grouped with regular ed?

    Comments:
    1. I'm not sure how the two subjects will be merged but I'm interested in seeing you guys work it out!
    2. Great words in your objectives!

    Suggestion
    1. Give the students a list of deadlines.

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  30. Abbie Freeman
    Ecology
    3 questions
    What is your community connection?
    How will you incorporate activities for all learning styles?
    What software will your students be using?
    2 comments
    I love biomes!
    Students are always interested in this topic.
    1 suggestions
    Try to incoporate as much funtional and textual reading material as possible.

    2 comments

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  31. Tai Alexander
    Ecology

    3 Questions:
    1. Will you be able to hit all of the objectives that you listed?
    2.How can you make your instructional procedures more detailed to help with planning?
    3. How are you going to assess their progress?


    2 Comments:
    1. I think it's interesting how you integrated BTA with Ecology. Neato!
    2. I'm so glad you were able to help explain this difficult content using so much technology.

    1 Suggestion:
    1. Add more details into your instructional procedures

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